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What extracurricular activities do you enjoy and hate? Explain.

차유진/2024-11-10

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I like Physical Education because that is fun and just a little bit a week. I hate math because math is hard and that is not necessary in life. Math is not fun:(
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                                   What extracurricular activities do you enjoy and hate? Explain.


I like Physical Education because that is fun and just a little bit a week.
>> I like Physical Education because it is fun and we only have it for a short time each week. 

I hate math because math is hard and that is not necessary in life.
>> I hate math because it is hard and is not necessary in life.

Math is not fun:(
>> OR: Math is boring. 

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