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What's the best thing about elementary first graders?

차진혁/2024-11-10

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My best thing about elementary first garders first, first graders friends are kind. Second, first graders teacher is very smart. Third, class time is 4th peried, it is very short.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening! 


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Jean~~




                                          What's the best thing about elementary first graders? 


 My best thing about elementary first garders first, first graders friends are kind. 
>> The best things about elementary first graders are, first, my first-grader classmates are kind. 

Second, first graders teacher is very smart. 
>> Second, my first-grader teachers are very smart. 

Third, class time is 4th peried, it is very short. 
>> Third, the 4th-period class time is very short.
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