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Have you ever had to step in and help during a difficult time for a family member? What did you do?

임주미/2024-10-21

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A few years ago, my elder brother's wife and brother often fought each other. My brother was having hard time, I frequently told him "it's okay and it will past. At that time , I activtly stepped in them.
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Hello, Ju Mi! Sometimes, we have to step in and help the people we love and care for. ^^ Have a good day! See you tomorrow!
~T. Jewel
A few years ago, my elder brother's wife and brother often fought each other.
>>A few years ago, my elder brother and his wife often fought.
My brother was having hard time, I frequently told him "it's okay and it will past.
>>My brother was having a hard time, and I frequently told him, 'It's okay, it will pass.'
At that time , I activtly stepped in them.
>>At that time, I actively stepped in to help them.
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