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Why do you think apologizing is important in relationships?

박소은/2024-10-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think an apology is an admission of a mistake. Admitting a mistake and not repeating it is the core of interpersonal relationships.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Anna!

You're absolutely right! Apologies, when sincere, not only show accountability but also strengthen trust and communication in relationships. The real value lies in learning from mistakes and making a conscious effort to avoid them in the future. It’s key to building lasting connections.

~Kelly

I think an apology is an admission of a mistake.

>> Correct

OR:

>> I believe that offering an apology acknowledges a mistake.

Admitting a mistake and not repeating it is the core of interpersonal relationships.

>> Correct

OR:

>> Recognizing errors and ensuring they are not repeated forms the foundation of healthy interpersonal relationships.