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Age gap beneficial and hindrance

김길수/2024-07-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

There are two groups in my office. A junior group is 30`s and a senior group is over 40`s. Juniors do annoying things like cleaning the pantry. One of age gap hindrance ,In general, group of age gap have different interest in. I feel invisible wall with the groups. So we don`t communicate closely.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Tom!

I think it's natural for different age groups to have varying interests and communication styles, which can sometimes create a feeling of distance or an 'invisible wall.' However, this diversity can also be beneficial, as it brings different perspectives and experiences to the workplace.

~ Trixia

Content:

There are two groups in my office.

- CORRECT.

A junior group is 30`s and a senior group is over 40`s.

- A junior group is in their 30's, and a senior group is over 40's.

Juniors do annoying things like cleaning the pantry.

- CORRECT.

One of age gap hindrance ,In general, group of age gap have different interest in.

- One of the age gap hindrances is that, in general, groups with different age gaps have different interests.

I feel invisible wall with the groups.

- I feel an invisible wall with the groups.

So we don`t communicate closely.

- CORRECT.