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Do you ever get confused with new technology? Give an example.

현무/2024-07-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

yes , It's the Apple phone I use. There are many functions that I don't know how to use, There is no need to use them. If want to use them, i have to study them... Headache.

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Hey Kyle! Thank you for taking time to do the homework right away! You've been doing these more consistently. Keep it up!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

yes , It's the Apple phone I use.

>> Yes, it's the Apple phone I use.

OR >> Yes, I use an Apple phone.

There are many functions that I don't know how to use, There is no need to use them.

>> There are many functions that I don't know how to use, and there's no need to use them.

OR >> It has many functions that I don't know how to use, and I don't really need to use them.

If want to use them, i have to study them... Headache.

>> If I want to use them, I have to study them... What a headache.

OR >> If I want to use them, I'll need to learn how... It’s quite a hassle.