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Write about a memorable holiday experience.

신봉규/2024-09-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I went to nursing home to see my grandmother. it was nice to see my grandmother after a long time. and I had a good rest.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I went to nursing home to see my grandmother. it was nice to see my grandmother after a long time. and I had a good rest.
>> I went to the nursing home to see my grandmother. It was nice to see her after a long time, and I had a good rest.