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Yes, I like cheese.

유수빈/2025-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I like cheese. Cheese is used as an ingredient for many foods. (pizza, pasta, bread...) Also, I eat cheese everyday. I usually eat slice of cheese itself or with Kimchi fried rice. Not only is it delicious, but it's also good for bone health.
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Hi Kara! 

I also like cheese, but can't have too much of it.
As a lactose-intolerant person, I have to lessen my cheese intake. 

Andrea 

Yes, I like cheese. 
>> Correct
 
Cheese is used as an ingredient for many foods. (pizza, pasta, bread...)
>> Correct 

Also, I eat cheese everyday. 
>> Also, I eat cheese every day. 

I usually eat slice of cheese itself or with Kimchi fried rice.
>> I usually eat a slice of cheese by itself or with Kimchi fried rice.

Not only is it delicious, but it's also good for bone health.
>> Correct
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