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Can you tell me about an unforgettable thing that you have seen? What made it unforgettable?

이진태/2025-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

It might my oldest memory, I was 3 or 4 years old, I visited someone's house that maybe it's my friend's home. I played video game, I shocked. I still remeber those images.

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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

It might my oldest memory, I was 3 or 4 years old, I visited someone's house that maybe it's my friend's home.
I played video game, I shocked. I still remeber those images.

>> It might be my oldest memory. I was 3 or 4 years old when I visited someone’s house — maybe it was my friend’s home. I played a video game there, and I was shocked. I still remember the images from that moment.