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Write your thoughts on the new Korean president using at least five vocabulary words from Let's Tal

차진혁/2025-06-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

My country new president is very good because he is peace of Korea and economic growth is a promise. So now President is very good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good evening there!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Write your thoughts on the new Korean president using at least five vocabulary words from Let's Talk.

My country new president is very good because he is peace of Korea and economic growth is a promise.

So now President is very good.

>>> The new president of my country is excellent because he prioritizes peace in Korea and has promised economic growth. His leadership brings hope for a better future.