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Do you prefer guided tours or exploring on your own? Why?

이승훈/2025-06-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

i awlays visited tour with guide. because i didn't speak english well. and i don't have courage in strange environment. and with guide, our tour is convienent. but guide tour exist disadvantage too. guide tour is freedom short. guide tour is need to many tourist together. and must moving a set schedules moving. so i will study english well, and i will exploring tour in oneself. no guide.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Hun!

You are right! Guided tours can be convenient when visiting a country that has a different language than ours since they can translate everything for us. However, like you mentioned, freedom is very limited, and you have to follow their schedule even if you don't want to. I really hope that through our lessons, you can gain confidence in speaking English and can try traveling without a guide in foreign countries! I'm rooting for you!

- T. Caitlyn

i awlays visited tour with guide. because i didn't speak english well.

>> I always visited tours with a guide because I don't speak English well.
and i don't have courage in strange environment.

>> I don't have courage in unfamiliar environments.
and with guide, our tour is convienent.

>> With a guide, our tour is convenient.
but guide tour exist disadvantage too.

>> But guided tours have disadvantages too.
guide tour is freedom short.

>> Guided tours offer little freedom.

guide tour is need to many tourist together.

>> Guided tours require many tourists to be together.
and must moving a set schedules moving.

>> You must follow a set schedule when taking a guided tour.
so i will study english well, and i will exploring tour in oneself. no guide.

>> So, I will study English well, and I will explore tours on my own, without a guide.