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What is your favorite place in Korea that was built for someone? Tell me about it.

이복희/2025-06-04

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When I was student, a lot of shool had a few statue. The statue was built to commemorate great man's. My school had statue of king sejong and Admiral yi sun-shin. These days all most school didn't have it. I didn't know where these statue gone. Our city have a small park, there is statue, it was built to commemorate March first independ movement. People these days don't care these monument. I want that young people can remember our painful history.

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Hello, Ms. Eva!

Thank you for sharing this, and it is interesting to know that your country values the contribution of every individual. See you in class!

Aki~

When I was student, a lot of shool had a few statue.

>>> When I was a student, many schools had statues..

The statue was built to commemorate great man's.

>>> The statue was built to commemorate a great person.

My school had statue of king sejong and Admiral yi sun-shin.

>>> My school had a statue of King Sejong and Admiral Yi Sun-sin.

These days all most school didn't have it.

>>> These days, most schools don't have it.

I didn't know where these statue gone.

>>> I didn't know where these statues had gone.

Our city have a small park, there is statue, it was built to commemorate March first independ movement.

>>> Our city has a small park, there is a statue, it was built to commemorate the March First independence movement.

People these days don't care these monument.

>>> People these days don't care about these monuments.

I want that young people can remember our painful history.

>>> I want young people can remember our painful history.