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No, I don't want to have a pet.

유수빈/2025-06-04

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No, I don't want to have a pet. I don't like dog and cat, because I'm scared of them. Also, my family doesn't like animals very much. So, I think it's also hereditary.
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Hi Kara! 

I never wanted to have a pet before because I knew that it's going to be a responsibility. \
It was my husband's idea to get a pet. 
He wanted to have a companion at home so I just agreed.

Andrea 

No, I don't want to have a pet.
>> Correct 

I don't like dog and cat, because I'm scared of them.
>>  I don't like dogs nor cats because I'm scared of them. 
 
Also, my family doesn't like animals very much.
>> Also, my family doesn't like animals that much.

So, I think it's also hereditary.
>> Correct 
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