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At would age would like to become independent from your parents? Explain.

차진혁/2025-05-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I'm not age independent from my parents because I love my parents. But, independent are starting is twenty.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good night's sleep! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                          At would age would like to become independent from your parents? Explain.


I'm not age independent from my parents because I love my parents.
But, independent are starting is twenty.
>>> I'm not independent from my parents because I love them. But independence usually starts at twenty.
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