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What’s the most unusual souvenir you’ve ever seen?

이승훈/2025-05-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
About 4years ago, i worked in hungary along 4 month. when i before return in korea, i try to found hungary special souvenir. i found new fact that each national have to diffrent mug cup and tumbler in starbucks. so i bought three mug cup and one tumbler. those were budapest castle(landmark) in drawn in souvenir. and i want to bought tokaj wine(hungary wine) but i forgot it. if i go to travel another national, i will buy different various cup in starbucks.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Hun!
Wow! That's very interesting to know. I actually didn't have any idea that Starbucks has mugs that can be souvenirs in each country. I think collecting them would be fulfilling because you can look back on all the countries you've been to!
- T. Caitlyn 
About 4years ago, i worked in hungary along 4 month.
>> About 4 years ago, I worked in Hungary for 4 months.
when i before return in korea, i try to found hungary special souvenir.
>> Before I returned to Korea, I tried to find a special Hungarian souvenir.
i found new fact that each national have to diffrent mug cup and tumbler in starbucks.
>> I discovered that each country has different mug cups and tumblers in Starbucks.
So, I bought three mug cup and one tumbler.
>> CORRECT
those were budapest castle(landmark) in drawn in souvenir.
>> These had Budapest Castle (a landmark) drawn on them as souvenirs.
and i want to bought tokaj wine(hungary wine) but i forgot it.
>> I wanted to buy Tokaji wine (Hungarian wine), but I forgot to.
if i go to travel another national, i will buy different various cup in starbucks.
>> If I travel to another country, I will buy different cups from Starbucks.
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