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What are some ways to stay physically active as you age?
임주미/2025-05-27
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Maybe it is exerciding steady and rest.
walking faster,swimming,playing tennis and weight training whatever it is, it's good.
I think we have to more eat fresh vegetables and fruit.
The food I eat is me.
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Happy Tuesday, Grace!
I totally agree with you! To stay physically fit, we need to manage both exercise and diet. It's nice that you stay active by playing sports or exercising regularly.
- T. Caitlyn
Maybe it is exerciding steady and rest.
>> Maybe it is about exercising steadily and resting.
walking faster,swimming,playing tennis and weight training whatever it is, it's good.
walking faster,swimming,playing tennis and weight training whatever it is, it's good.
>> Brisk walking, swimming, playing tennis, and weight training; whatever it is, it's good.
I think we have to more eat fresh vegetables and fruit.
I think we have to more eat fresh vegetables and fruit.
>> I think we have to eat more fresh vegetables and fruit.
The food I eat is me.
The food I eat is me.
>> CORRECT
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