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Yes, I have seen a shark.

유수빈/2025-05-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I have seen a shark. When I was young, I went to aquarium with mt parents. I saw a big shark, and I was so scared. If I actually meet a shark in the ocean, I have to run away so far.
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Hi Kara! 

I haven't seen a shark yet. 
The aquarium is quite far from our city.
It would take at least 6 hours. 

Andrea 

Yes, I have seen a shark.
>> Correct 

When I was young, I went to aquarium with mt parents.
>> When I was young, I went to an aquarium with my parents. 

I saw a big shark, and I was so scared.
>> Correct 

If I actually meet a shark in the ocean, I have to run away so far.
>> If I were to encounter a shark in the ocean, I would have to swim as far as I could. 
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