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In what ways has technology changed how your family interacts?
임주미/2025-05-14
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Technology has been changing a lot of things.
In the house, we send a massage cell phone in our own rooms don't come out .
we don't have to talk also reduce conversation with falily.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Grace!
I agree that technology has changed the way we interact. It's true that technology brings distant people closer but can push close people farther apart. It's sad in a way, but I think we still have to find balance and learn to appreciate what we have now.
- T. Caitlyn
Technology has been changing a lot of things.
>> CORRECT
In the house, we send a massage cell phone in our own rooms don't come out .
In the house, we send a massage cell phone in our own rooms don't come out .
>> In the house, we send messages on our cell phones while staying in our own rooms and don’t come out.
we don't have to talk also reduce conversation with falily.
we don't have to talk also reduce conversation with falily.
>> We don’t have to talk, which also reduces conversation with family.
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