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권경희/2025-05-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think that it is impossible to improve under Trump's leadership because his choices are disrupt and destruct of world order. Global world are suffering by his ignorant and violent policies. Everyone know that nobody live alone in this world. Only Trump does not know that.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Ms. Lily!
Thank you for sharing your thought. A great leader is determine by his actions. American supporters (who voted for him) are now reaping the result of their decision for choosing Trump as their  president. Good luck to them.
Aki~


I think that it is impossible to improve under Trump's leadership because his choices are disrupt and destruct of world order.
>>> I think that it is impossible to improve under Trump's leadership because his choices are disruptive and destruct of the world order.

Global world are suffering by his ignorant and violent policies.
>>> The world is suffering from his ignorant and violent policies.

Everyone know that nobody live alone in this world.
>>> Everyone knows that nobody lives alone in this world.

Only Trump does not know that.
>>> CORRECT!

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