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The homework for 13th May.

조윤호/2025-05-13

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Q : Describe a tourist attraction you once visited. A : When I had a trip to the Philippines, I visited Oslob to see whale sharks. Because they are located at sea, me and my friends aboard a boat. After the boat halts near whale sharks, we can dive into the sea and take a photo with whale sharks. That was a very interesting experience.

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Hello, Jo Yun Ho!

Thank you for doing your homework! ^^ Great work! you shared your experience in detail and complete sentences. Please check the corrections.

See you next time!

~ Trixia

CONTENT:

When I had a trip to the Philippines, I visited Oslob to see whale sharks.

- When I took a trip to the Philippines, I visited Oslob to see the whale sharks.

Because they are located at sea, me and my friends aboard a boat.

- Because they live in the sea, my friends and I boarded a boat.

After the boat halts near whale sharks, we can dive into the sea and take a photo with whale sharks.

- After the boat stopped near the whale sharks, we were able to dive into the water and take photos with them.

That was a very interesting experience.

- It was a very interesting experience.