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I like meeting new people

권경미/2025-05-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I was young, I was too shy to meet new people. As I get older, I get used to strangers. Meeting new people makes me getting a lot of chances for understangs to others. I am so glad to grow up through them.
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Here's your corrected composition, Judy.  Please go over the revisions given below. See you next class and have a good night's sleep! 


Cheers,
Jean~~





                                    Do you like meeting new people?


When I was young, I was too shy to meet new people.
As I get older, I get used to strangers.
>>>  I used to be too shy to meet new people when I was young, but as I got older, I became more at ease around strangers.

Meeting new people makes me getting a lot of chances for understangs to others.
I am so glad to grow up through them.
>>> By meeting new people, I gain valuable opportunities to understand others better. I’m really thankful for how these experiences have helped me grow. 
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