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Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more?

임주미/2025-05-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I guess ,we have to use public trasnport more than car commute time. Especially the traffic is really bad during rush hour so the government should give benefits to commters.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Grace^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
_T. SHAY^^
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I guess ,we have to use public trasnport more than car commute time.
>>I guess we have to use the public transport more than our own cars.
Especially the traffic is really bad during rush hour so the government should give benefits to commters.
>>Also, the traffic is really bad during rush hours, so the government should give benefits to the commuters.
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