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이현아/2025-05-02

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HOMEWORK: Can a bad first impression be changed? How? I think first impressions come from my past. If someone looks like a nice person I met before, I like them. If they look like a bad person I met before, I don’t like them. Before, I didn’t do this. But now, I do it more. I met many people, so I can guess who is nice or not. If I feel bad at first, they are usually not nice.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Isabel. You're expressing your thoughts very clearly and logically. Great job! Your writing flows well and shows thoughtful reflection. Just be mindful of verb tense (e.g., "I’ve met" instead of "I met") and adding small words like “often” for clarity. Keep up the good work!

~ T. Lia

I think first impressions come from my past.
>> CORRECT

If someone looks like a nice person I met before, I like them.
>> CORRECT

If they look like a bad person I met before, I don’t like them.
>> CORRECT

Before, I didn’t do this.
>> CORRECT

But now, I do it more.
>> But now, I do it more often.

I met many people, so I can guess who is nice or not.
>> I’ve met many people, so I can guess who is nice or not.

If I feel bad at first, they are usually not nice.
>> CORRECT

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