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I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’.

유수빈/2025-05-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No, I don’t think so. I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’. This bird’s fur is various color. Especially, I like a bird that has rainbow color. Also, this bird can copy a person’s words. Therefore, I like parrot that has many charms.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara!

Thank you for sending your homework. 
Parrot is also a beautiful bird. 

Andrea 

No, I don’t think so.
>> Correct 

I think that the most beautiful bird is ‘parrot’.
>> I think that the most beautiful bird is the parrot.

This bird’s fur is various color.
>> This bird's feather has various color. 
>> The bird has a colorful feather. 

Especially, I like a bird that has rainbow color.
>> I especially like birds that have a rainbow color. 

Also, this bird can copy a person’s words.
>> In addition, this bird can mimic a person talking. 

Therefore, I like parrot that has many charms.
>> Therefore, I like charming parrots. 
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