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이현아/2025-04-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

HOMEWORK: Write an essay about your part-time job. Use the following sentence patterns. Job / Position I work there as a Designer. Company I’m doing full time employee at a decoration tile company. Task I am in charge of Product design, package, and pattern development.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Isabel. You’re doing a great job explaining your role! Just remember to check capitalization (like "Product" - "product") and make sure your job descriptions are clear. "Full-time" and "decorative" help make the meaning even clearer. Keep going, your writing is improving.

~ T. Lia

I work there as a Designer.
>> I work there as a designer.

I’m doing full time employee at a decoration tile company.
>> I’m a full-time employee at a decorative tile company.

I am in charge of Product design, package, and pattern development.
>> I am in charge of product design, packaging, and pattern development.