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What motivates you to save money?

이승훈/2025-04-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

umm. there is no motivate to save money. only just a habit ago. if i dont save money. in the future, i think i will hard life. sure of i will given national pension but, those money is not enough life. when i older, will delicious food, buying pretty clothes. and i buying my home. sure of i can jackpot of lotto and hit stock, but these are less chanse percent. so i will untiringly save money.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

I agree with you! Nowadays, saving money for the future is a must because we cannot rely solely on pension upon retirement. Also, if we want to live a comfortable life when we get older, sacrifice is needed now when it comes to spending.

- T. Caitlyn

umm. there is no motivate to save money.

>> Umm, there is no motivation to save money.

only just a habit ago.

>> It was only a habit before.
if i dont save money. in the future, i think i will hard life.

>> If I don't save money, in the future, I think I will have a hard life.

sure of i will given national pension but, those money is not enough life.

>> Sure, I will be given a national pension, but that money is not enough to live on.
when i older, will delicious food, buying pretty clothes. and i buying my home.

>> When I am older, I want to eat delicious food, buy pretty clothes, and purchase my own home.
sure of i can jackpot of lotto and hit stock, but these are less chanse percent.

>> Sure, I might win the lottery jackpot or succeed in stocks, but these have a low percentage of chance.
so i will untiringly save money.

>> So, I will continue to save money tirelessly.