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How do you feel about the idea of a four-day work week?

이진태/2025-04-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In terms of employee, "Four-day work" is same a heaven. On the other hand, it can cause weak competitivenss of company. In China, they work wholeday and night without weekend. It may be bad for long term.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

In terms of employee, "Four-day work" is same a heaven.
>> In terms of employees, a four-day workweek feels like heaven.

On the other hand, it can cause weak competitivenss of company.
>> On the other hand, it can weaken a company's competitiveness.

In China, they work wholeday and night without weekend.
>> In China, people work all day and night without weekends.

It may be bad for long term.
>> This may be harmful in the long term.


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