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Do you think remote working will be more common in the future?

이진태/2025-04-28

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Some companies in Korea have adopted a remote working already. However, it is rare yet. As the telecomunication technology advance, a remote working will be spreaded.

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Some companies in Korea have adopted a remote working already. However, it is rare yet.
As the telecomunication technology advance, a remote working will be spreaded.

>> Some companies in Korea have already adopted remote working. However, it is still rare. As telecommunication technology advances, remote working will become more widespread.

OR >> While some companies in Korea have already embraced remote working, it remains uncommon. As telecommunication technology continues to develop, remote work is expected to become more prevalent.