Gadget The gadget I am going to write about is a smartphon. Use My smartphon isn’t only used to calling, it can also be used to everythin. Importance It is very important to me because I'm always use smartphon.

Hi Isabel. You're on the right track by organizing your ideas clearly into sections. That’s a good habit! Watch out for spelling errors (like "smartphon" - "smartphone") and double-check small grammar points, such as verb forms ("I’m always use" - "I always use"). Keep practicing. Your structure is already solid, and your writing will become stronger with more attention to details.