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What’s one thing you’re most excited about at your son's wedding?

이복희/2025-04-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Tomorrow is my son's wedding. I am exciting all the things. I never seen intimate wedding. I prepare congratulatory message for them. I have written it for long time, because I have something that I want to say to them. I think that I can't write all my thinking, but I belive that they will know my mind. I feel that he is young yet, l can't belive he's wedding. I feel so sad, because it seems like my son going somewhere. But I will think that l will get a daughter. I am expecting tomorrow.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
 Hello, Ms. Eva!
Weddings are one of the highlights in a relationship of couple. I feel happy every time I hear someone getting married. I hope that your son and his wife will have a happy marriage just like you. 
Aki~

Tomorrow is my son's wedding.
>>> CORRECT!

I am exciting all the things.
>>> I am excited about all the things.

I never seen intimate wedding. I prepare congratulatory message for them.
>>> I have never seen an intimate wedding. I prepared a congratulatory message for them.

I have written it for long time, because I have something that I want to say to them.
>>> I have written it for a long time, because I have something that I want to say to them.

I think that I can't write all my thinking, but I belive that they will know my mind.
>>> I believe that I can't express all my thoughts, but I trust they will understand my perspective.

I feel that he is young yet, l can't belive he's wedding.
>>> I feel that he is young yet, l can't believe that he is getting married.

I feel so sad, because it seems like my son going somewhere.
>>> I feel so sad, because it seems like my son is going somewhere.

But I will think that l will get a daughter. I am expecting tomorrow.
>>> But I just think that l will get a daughter. I am expecting tomorrow.

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