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Birthday present that I want to receive is tumbler.

유수빈/2025-04-25

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Birthday present that I want to receive is tumbler. I use a STARBUCKS tumbler. I've been using this tumbler since 2023. So, I want to new tumbler because I only use this everyday. If I receive something new, I'll use these two tumblers alternately.

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Hi Kara!

Many people like to collect Starbucks tumblers.
I think it's because of its design, quality, and durability.

Andrea

Birthday present that I want to receive is tumbler.

>> I want to receive a tumbler for my birthday.

>> I want to receive a tumble as a birthday present.

I use a STARBUCKS tumbler. I've been using this tumbler since 2023.

>> I have been using a Starbucks tumbler since 2023.

So, I want to new tumbler because I only use this everyday.

>> So I want a new tumbler because I can use it every day.

If I receive something new, I'll use these two tumblers alternately.

>> If I receive a new one, I'll use these two tumblers alternately.