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How much time do you usually spend when talking to someone on the phone ?
박순호/2025-04-22
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In Korea, it is common for women to spend a lot of time talking on the phone with friends. Young women in particular spend even more time on the phone.
In my daughters' case, they often talk on the phone for more than 30 minutes at a time. I often nag them about that, but they don't listen.
On the other hand, unlike other middle-aged Korean men, I don't often have long phone conversations with friends or coworkers.
Instead of talking on the phone, we like to communicate through Kakaotalk or meet and drink together and talk about each other's work, family, and each other's concerns.
I think the difference in phone usage time between men and women will be the same not only in Korea but also in the Philippines.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Mr. Park^^
Thank you for sharing.
I guess it is similar.
However, there are women who don't like talking on the phone too.
And sometimes it depends on the person they are talking to.
_T. SHAY^^
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In Korea, it is common for women to spend a lot of time talking on the phone with friends.
Thank you for sharing.
I guess it is similar.
However, there are women who don't like talking on the phone too.
And sometimes it depends on the person they are talking to.
_T. SHAY^^
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In Korea, it is common for women to spend a lot of time talking on the phone with friends.
>>Correct
OR: It's typical in Korea for women to spend a lot of time chatting on the phone with friends.
Young women in particular spend even more time on the phone.
OR: It's typical in Korea for women to spend a lot of time chatting on the phone with friends.
Young women in particular spend even more time on the phone.
>>Correct
OR: Young women especially seem to spend more time chatting on the phone.
In my daughters' case, they often talk on the phone for more than 30 minutes at a time.
OR: Young women especially seem to spend more time chatting on the phone.
In my daughters' case, they often talk on the phone for more than 30 minutes at a time.
>>Correct
OR: As for my daughters, they often have phone conversations that last over 30 minutes.
I often nag them about that, but they don't listen.
OR: As for my daughters, they often have phone conversations that last over 30 minutes.
I often nag them about that, but they don't listen.
>>Correct
OR: I bring it up often, but they don't pay much attention.
On the other hand, unlike other middle-aged Korean men, I don't often have long phone conversations with friends or coworkers.
OR: I bring it up often, but they don't pay much attention.
On the other hand, unlike other middle-aged Korean men, I don't often have long phone conversations with friends or coworkers.
>>Correct
OR: In contrast to many middle-aged Korean men, I rarely have long phone chats with friends or coworkers.
Instead of talking on the phone, we like to communicate through Kakaotalk or meet and drink together and talk about each other's work, family, and each other's concerns.
OR: In contrast to many middle-aged Korean men, I rarely have long phone chats with friends or coworkers.
Instead of talking on the phone, we like to communicate through Kakaotalk or meet and drink together and talk about each other's work, family, and each other's concerns.
>>Correct
OR: We prefer to communicate through Kakaotalk or get together, drink and talk about each other's work, family, and concerns.
I think the difference in phone usage time between men and women will be the same not only in Korea but also in the Philippines.
I think the difference in phone usage time between men and women will be the same not only in Korea but also in the Philippines.
>>Correct
OR: I think the phone usage among men and women is similar in the Philippines.
OR: I think the phone usage among men and women is similar in the Philippines.
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