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김순님/2025-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Old people's bad eyesight is the worst condition for learning English. It makes me reducing about my passion for English. I don't want to look at the book wearing glasses. It feels dizzy and anoying. So I want to memorize the words before wearing old person's glasses . Therefore there is the expiration date for learning English.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there, Ms. Sunny!
Yes, there are factors contributing to losing interest in learning English or other classes. So while we are still young, let's try to explore things we are not familiar with.
Aki~

Old people's bad eyesight is the worst condition for learning English.
>>> Old people's bad eyesight has worsened the condition for learning English.

It makes me reducing about my passion for English.
>>> It makes me lose my passion for English.

I don't want to look at the book wearing glasses.
>>> CORRECT!

It feels dizzy and anoying.
>>> It makes me feel dizzy and annoyed.

So I want to memorize the words before wearing old person's glasses .
>>> CORRECT!

Therefore there is the expiration date for learning English.
>>> Therefore, there is an expiration date for learning English.
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