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How can a company attract talented employees?

윤성인/2025-04-15

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Nowadays many companies using the social network for attract talented employees. And they are sharing new information for their technology and social activity and hiring. Our company also using the social network channel for hiring talented employees.I also move a job through the Linked in.
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You're absolutely right, Leo!

Social media has become a powerful tool for recruitment. Platforms like LinkedIn make it easier for companies to showcase their culture, innovation, and values, which can really appeal to top talent. 

- Kristine ^^ 

Nowadays many companies using the social network for attract talented employees. 
>> Nowadays, many companies are using social networks to attract talented applicants.
And they are sharing new information for their technology and social activity and hiring. 
>> They are also sharing new information about their technology, social activities, and hiring opportunities.
Our company also using the social network channel for hiring talented employees.
>> Our company also uses social media channels to attract and hire talented employees.
I also move a job through the Linked in.
>>I also found my job through LinkedIn.
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