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Bad sleeping

최민영/2025-04-15

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I lose my head in sleep all day long. I must need to sleep at least 3-5 hours. If I didn’t sleep well, I drowse for taking class and want to eat some strong coffee. I know drinking coffee isn’t good for me. Actually I don’t know It’s effective method. But drinking some beverage and trying to wake up inform that I have the minimum conscience. So, bad sleeping before is hard to me.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Jady!
You can make simple sentences.
Now, let's focus on learning new patterns.
You can use them to improve your work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I lose my head in sleep all day long.

>> Correct
I must need to sleep at least 3-5 hours.

>> I must sleep at least 3–5 hours.
If I didn’t sleep well, I drowse for taking class and want to eat some strong coffee.

>> If I don’t sleep well, I feel drowsy during class and want to drink some strong coffee.
I know drinking coffee isn’t good for me.

>> Correct
Actually I don’t know It’s effective method.

>> Actually, I don’t know if it’s an effective method.
But drinking some beverage and trying to wake up inform that I have the minimum conscience.

>> However, drinking something and trying to wake up shows that I have at least some awareness.
So, bad sleeping before is hard to me.

>> So, poor sleep before is hard for me.