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최민영/2025-04-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My confident thing is steadyness. Why I think is the thing that I do well. Even if I don't look some performance, I do just continuously something. As a result, there are times when performance is very nice and good. If I don't see some good, process of failure is good for my success of future. So, doing steadyness and thinking positive is my confident thing.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Jady!
Let's work on your vocabulary words.
I know it could be quite difficult.
However, I know you're up to the challenge.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My confident thing is steadyness.
>> I am confident about my consistency.
Why I think is the thing that I do well.
>> The reason I think this is because it’s something I do well.
Even if I don't look some performance, I do just continuously something.
>> Even if I don't see some performance, I just continue doing something.
As a result, there are times when performance is very nice and good.
>> As a result, there are times when the performance is very nice and good.
If I don't see some good, process of failure is good for my success of future.
>> If I don't see some good results, the process of failure is still good for my success in the future.
So, doing steadyness and thinking positive is my confident thing.
>> So, I'm confident about my consistency and positive thinking. 


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