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What are the advantages of being bilingual?

이진태/2025-04-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Being bilingual is powerful weapon in the life. Communication is essential and a first step for living. If I were a bilingual, I could do world wide business easily.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Being bilingual is powerful weapon in the life.
>> Being bilingual is a powerful weapon in life.

Communication is essential and a first step for living.
>> Communication is essential and the first step to living meaningfully.

If I were a bilingual, I could do world wide business easily.
>> If I were bilingual, I could do business worldwide more easily.
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