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What are the most important things you want to share when introducing yourself?

이진태/2025-04-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I usually introduced myself during job interview. When my job interview, I always shared my job carrer path. Interviewer were understood easily about me because I explained my carrer path.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I usually introduced myself during job interview.
>> I usually introduce myself during job interviews.
OR >> I typically begin by introducing myself in job interviews.

When my job interview, I always shared my job carrer path.
>> During the interview, I always share my career path.

Interviewer were understood easily about me because I explained my carrer path.
>> The interviewers can easily understand me because I explain my career background clearly.
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