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How do you adjust your routine when unexpected things happen?

이진태/2025-04-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I should change my routine or habits, if the unexpected things happen frequantly during work. Unexpected thing is a risk for the business. we need to prevent this risk.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I should change my routine or habits, if the unexpected things happen frequantly during work.
>> I should change my routine or habits if unexpected things happen frequently during work.

Unexpected thing is a risk for the business. we need to prevent this risk.
>> Unexpected events are a risk to the business, and we need to prevent these risks.
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