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최민영/2025-04-04
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I sick, I need to sleep almoost all day long.
But, I have a lot of schedule as much as I can't rest in weekday.
So, if I have common disease such as cold and fever, It's a quandary.
For being good feeling, I restain myself and wait weekend.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Jady!
Let's focus on organization of thoughts.
This can be achieved through constant practice.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I sick, I need to sleep almoost all day long.
>> When I am sick, I need to sleep almost all day long.
But, I have a lot of schedule as much as I can't rest in weekday.
But, I have a lot of schedule as much as I can't rest in weekday.
>> However, I have a busy schedule, so I can't rest much on weekdays.
So, if I have common disease such as cold and fever, It's a quandary.
So, if I have common disease such as cold and fever, It's a quandary.
>> So, if I catch a common illness such as a cold or fever, it's a quandary.
For being good feeling, I restain myself and wait weekend
For being good feeling, I restain myself and wait weekend
>> To feel better, I restrain myself and wait for the weekend.
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