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김여운/2025-04-04

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I think the worst of allergy that i don’t want to eat it. For example, i don’t eat Korea melon which is my favorite food but when i turned 16, i became allergic to honeydew. So i don’t it anymore. Another reason, i don’t experience taste which i had allergy food. When many people say “it’s very delicious”, i feel sad because i don’t eat them.

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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

I think the worst of allergy that I don’t want to eat it.

>> I think the worst kind of allergy is food allergy.

For example, I don’t eat Korea melon which is my favorite food but when I turned 16, I became allergic to honeydew.

>> For example, I can't eat Korean melon even if it's my favorite food but when I turned 16, I became allergic to honeydew.

So I don’t it anymore.

>> So I don’t eat it anymore.

Another reason, I don’t experience taste which I had allergy food.

>> Another reason, I don’t get the chance to experience the taste which I am allergic to.

When many people say “it’s very delicious”, I feel sad because I don’t eat them.

>> CORRECT!