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권경희/2025-04-04

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Many young generation are looking for jobs that they are satisfied conditions. As paternity leave and additional coupon , these conditions are that everyone envies. It is getting more and more difficult situation that small sized companies are hire good worker .
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Ms. Lily!
I agree! A lot of young people now do not want to go outside their comfort zones. They sometimes do not welcome challenges, and they rely on physically available things. Just like perks, as we know that that perks is good and it is one of the strategies of companies to make you work with them for a long time, however, it is not a stable compensation.
Aki~

Many young generation are looking for jobs that they are satisfied conditions.
>>>  Many young people are looking for jobs that they are satisfied conditions.

As paternity leave and additional coupon , these conditions are that everyone envies.
>>> As paternity leave and additional coupons, these conditions are what everyone envies.

It is getting more and more difficult situation that small sized companies are hire good worker .
>>> It is getting more and more difficult situation that small-sized companies are hire good worker.
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