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Acheiving my goal

최민영/2025-04-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
At first, Speaking English is very scared because I talk some wrong word and sentence. But, the more I learn I feel better, because I think I can get it wrong. So, I will aceive my goal that don't hesitate when I talk foreiner to English. I feel like I'm wrapping up the day for this class. Thus, It's good time for me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Jady!
You can make good sentences.
Now, let's focus on learning new patterns. 
You can use them to improve your work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
At first, Speaking English is very scared because I talk some wrong word and sentence.
>> At first, speaking English was very scary because I used some wrong words and sentences.
But, the more I learn I feel better, because I think I can get it wrong.
>> However, the more I learn, the better I feel because I know it's okay to get it wrong sometimes.
So, I will aceive my goal that don't hesitate when I talk foreiner to English.
>> So, I will achieve my goal of speaking confidently without hesitation when I talk to foreigners in English.
I feel like I'm wrapping up the day for this class.
>> I feel like I'm wrapping up the day through this class.
Thus, It's good time for me.
>> Thus, I this schedule really works for me. 



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