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How does the etiquette of eating together in your country differ from other countries?
이지윤/2025-04-11
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Foods with soup such a stew put a personal spoon in one pot and scoop up the soup, but it was decided that there was a hygienic problem, so it changed to a method of sharing it on a personal plate.
Also, noodles are eaten whil slurping because it looks delicious to eat while slurping
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ji Yun!
Thank you for sharing your thought. :)
Your ideas were on point! You gave two clear examples of cultural eating habits. Try to check your spelling (e.g., whil → while) and make your sentences a bit smoother. Adding transition words like “For example” or “Nowadays” can also help your answer flow better. Keep practicing—you're doing great!
Your ideas were on point! You gave two clear examples of cultural eating habits. Try to check your spelling (e.g., whil → while) and make your sentences a bit smoother. Adding transition words like “For example” or “Nowadays” can also help your answer flow better. Keep practicing—you're doing great!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
Foods with soup such a stew put a personal spoon in one pot and scoop up the soup, but it was decided that there was a hygienic problem, so it changed to a method of sharing it on a personal plate.
- In my country, people used to eat foods like stew by putting their personal spoon into one shared pot to scoop the soup. However, due to hygiene concerns, this changed to a method where the soup is shared on individual plates.
Also, noodles are eaten whil slurping because it looks delicious to eat while slurping
- Also, noodles are eaten while slurping because it shows that the food is delicious.
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