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Do you think public transport should be free for everyone?

신봉규/2025-04-11

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I don't think so. many senior takes a public transport for free these days. We are losing a lot of money because of them doing nothing on the subway from morning to night.

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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I don't think so. many senior takes a public transport for free these days. We are losing a lot of money because of them doing nothing on the subway from morning to night.

>> I don't think so. Many seniors use public transportation for free these days. We're losing a lot of money because they spend time on the subway from morning to night without any particular purpose.