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한진원/2025-04-02

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There are going on a cruise, maintaining a weight under 50 kg, mastering English coversation, trvelling alone and supporting paople in need and so on in my bucketlist. So far, I've checked trvelling alone and supporting people in need in the list.

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Hi, Racheal! These are really good items to be on a bucket list. I hope you'll be able to tick them off one by one soon. See you!

--Teacher Anji

There are going on a cruise, maintaining a weight under 50 kg, mastering English coversation, trvelling alone and supporting paople in need and so on in my bucketlist.
>> Going on a cruise, maintaining weight under 50 kg, mastering English coversation, travelling alone, supporting paople in need and many more, are on my bucketlist.
So far, I've checked trvelling alone and supporting people in need in the list.
>> So far, I've checked travelling alone and supporting people in need on the list.