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이유민/2025-04-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. Although she was unhappy she said nothing. 2. Because I liked him, I tried to help him. 3. Since I liked him,I helped him. 4. As you know, I work very hard. 5. As you know, I like him very much. 6. We came back because we were short of cash. 7. I have got a friend who works in a pub. 8. She always thanks me for all the help that I give her. 9. Because she was depressed,she didn’t know what to do. 10. Cook slowly unless you are ready.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there(^^,)


I am really glad that you are doing your best in studying.

I know that you are tired so please rest well.

If you have any concerns about our topic today please feel free to ask.

Be sincere and humble always.

 

Have a great day!

Take care always.

T. Jeny


1. Although she was unhappy she said nothing.
>>correct
2. Because I liked him, I tried to help him.
>>correct
3. Since I liked him,I helped him.
>>As you know, I work very hard.
4. As you know, I work very hard.
>>correct
5. As you know, I like him very much.
>>correct
6. We came back because we were short of cash.
>>correct
7. I have got a friend who works in a pub.
>>correct
8. She always thanks me for all the help that I give her.
>>correct
9. Because she was depressed,she didn’t know what to do.
>>correct
10. Cook slowly unless you are ready.
>>Cook slowly until ready.
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