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최민영/2025-03-29

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I want to obtain some certificate, like OPIC, TOEIC Speaking and network management. Because, It will help me opportunity in future. So, I will study one by one, acheive my goal and catch a coming some opportunity. But, I think if I make it mandatory to obtain a certificate, someday I feel a sense of skeptisism. It's important to think positive, challenge, and not to be fraustrated.

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Hi Jady!

I hope your trip went well.

I'm looking forward to your story.

See you later!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I want to obtain some certificate, like OPIC, TOEIC Speaking and network management.

>> I want to obtain some certificates, such as OPIC, TOEIC Speaking, and network management.
Because, It will help me opportunity in future.

>> It's because they will help me gain opportunities in the future.
So, I will study one by one, acheive my goal and catch a coming some opportunity.

>> So, I will study one by one, achieve my goal, and seize upcoming opportunities.
But, I think if I make it mandatory to obtain a certificate, someday I feel a sense of skeptisism.

>> However, I think that if I make obtaining a certificate mandatory, I might someday feel a sense of skepticism.
It's important to think positive, challenge, and not to be fraustrated.

>> It’s important to think positive, take on challenges, and not get frustrated.