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Sad music

한진원/2025-03-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I tend to listen to sad music when I feel down. Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger, but I think it actually helps me relieve stress. The messages of these songs are usually sad like breakups

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Racheal! Sad music oftentimes appeal to our emotions, and it's actually healthy to have an outlet to express what we feel. Music is a great form of expression. Let's enjoy music!

--Teacher Anji

I tend to listen to sad music when I feel down.
>> CORRECT
Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger, but I think it actually helps me relieve stress.
>> Listening to this kind of music makes my emotions stronger and I think it actually helps me relieve stress.
The messages of these songs are usually sad like breakups.
>> CORRECT