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I think the best ocean animal is whale because whale is very big for animal. And whale is very cool.

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Jean~~

What's the best ocean animal in the world? Why?

I think the best ocean animal is whale because whale is very big for animal.

>> I think the best ocean animal is the whale because of its huge size.

And whale is very cool.

>> And whales look very cool.